FIRST-PERSON WRITING SAMPLE: [ the journal is opened to a rather exasperated sounding female voice ]
[ she's cut short, however, as a voice is picked up in the background ]
[ without so much as a "Sorry about that, Paradisa!" she's off to go confront this certain idiot... with her journal along to conveniently pick up the ensuing argument ]
[ if anybody were around to see, they would see Perona gesturing wildly from one shop to the one she had come from... and they are indeed in a straight line across the street ]
[ and then Perona gives a frustrated shout ]
[ there's a small pause as Zoro points to the open journal ]
[ however, as she says that, she slams the journal shut – enjoy wondering what the hell that was all about, Paradisa ]
INTENT: Mainly, I think that Perona would really love it in Paradisa. She's all about gothic settings, castles, ghosts, and the like. It'd almost be paradise to her... if it weren't for all the people who aren't servants. On top of that, I'd like to see her grow out of her shell a little more... though she'll still remain the bratty kid she is, it'd be nice to see her be a little more open. :3c
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[ the journal is opened to a rather exasperated sounding female voice ]
[ she's cut short, however, as a voice is picked up in the background ]
[ without so much as a "Sorry about that, Paradisa!" she's off to go confront this certain idiot... with her journal along to conveniently pick up the ensuing argument ]
[ if anybody were around to see, they would see Perona gesturing wildly from one shop to the one she had come from... and they are indeed in a straight line across the street ]
[ and then Perona gives a frustrated shout ]
[ there's a small pause as Zoro points to the open journal ]
[ however, as she says that, she slams the journal shut – enjoy wondering what the hell that was all about, Paradisa ]
INTENT: Mainly, I think that Perona would really love it in Paradisa. She's all about gothic settings, castles, ghosts, and the like. It'd almost be paradise to her... if it weren't for all the people who aren't servants. On top of that, I'd like to see her grow out of her shell a little more... though she'll still remain the bratty kid she is, it'd be nice to see her be a little more open. :3c